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You have probably seen the ponies in the background, you know, Vinyl Scratch, Dr Whooves, Lyra, Bon Bon and Derpy Hooves, who you haven't seen, is me. Oh, but you bet I'm there, and even though you can't see me, I always see you, I'm always staring directly at you, into your soul, in pony crowds, remember the gala? I was there, waiting for you to notice me, luckily for you, you didn't, If you had seen me, you wouldn't be reading this, you'd be at my side, like the good friends we are.

Remember the Smile song? How you were thrilled with the music, and seeing your favorite ponies dance and laugh? I was there, waiting for you to glance at me. You haven't seen me... yet. At the end, all of you will be my friends, all of you will be at my side at one point. Go ahead, rewatch an episode, maybe this time you'll see me, maybe this time I decide to talk to you. But you don't have to watch an episode for you to notice me, I can communicate with you, interact with you, maybe meet you, want to know where I am at this moment? You hear that voice in your mind that you hear while reading this? It's me, whispering at your ear.
Just me giving a shot at creepy pasta writing, probably isn't even scary or creepy, probably is super clichésque, but I'd like to know your opinion :D. Now in Dramatic reading W00T! [link] thanks to :iconsmilinghatsalesmare: for lending her cutesy wutesy voice!
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HeroesDoody Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, you failed, I was in the bathroom, but a great attempt :3
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SmilingHatSalesmare Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unfortunately the video link doesn't work, but I'd love to do a dramatic reading of this myself! Can I?
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juliofco Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course you can!
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SmilingHatSalesmare Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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juliofco Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome!
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SmilingHatSalesmare Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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juliofco Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd be quite honored actually
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lostsilverkitty Apr 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ok now I'm scared XD
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Tuquorise Apr 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Okay now I'm crepped out... anyways this is a really great written literature, as it is now on my group. (sorry for the SUPER late compliment, I'm busy)
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Oh-My-Maple Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*reads last line* OMIGOSH! there is a pony whispering to me! :D *looks around* ... Awww...
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