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You have probably seen the ponies in the background, you know, Vinyl Scratch, Dr Whooves, Lyra, Bon Bon and Derpy Hooves, who you haven't seen, is me. Oh, but you bet I'm there, and even though you can't see me, I always see you, I'm always staring directly at you, into your soul, in pony crowds, remember the gala? I was there, waiting for you to notice me, luckily for you, you didn't, If you had seen me, you wouldn't be reading this, you'd be at my side, like the good friends we are.

Remember the Smile song? How you were thrilled with the music, and seeing your favorite ponies dance and laugh? I was there, waiting for you to glance at me. You haven't seen me... yet. At the end, all of you will be my friends, all of you will be at my side at one point. Go ahead, rewatch an episode, maybe this time you'll see me, maybe this time I decide to talk to you. But you don't have to watch an episode for you to notice me, I can communicate with you, interact with you, maybe meet you, want to know where I am at this moment? You hear that voice in your mind that you hear while reading this? It's me, whispering at your ear.
Just me giving a shot at creepy pasta writing, probably isn't even scary or creepy, probably is super clichésque, but I'd like to know your opinion :D. Now in Dramatic reading W00T! [link] thanks to :iconsmilinghatsalesmare: for lending her cutesy wutesy voice!
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:iconmarblehornetsfan1:
MarbleHornetsFan1 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member Hobbyist Writer
:D cool!!!
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:iconslenderchild13:
slenderchild13 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
if it was there
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:iconslenderchild13:
slenderchild13 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
be very, very specific what scene was it in in the smile song very specific.
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:iconheroesdoody:
HeroesDoody Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol, you failed, I was in the bathroom, but a great attempt :3
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:iconsmilinghatsalesmare:
SmilingHatSalesmare Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Unfortunately the video link doesn't work, but I'd love to do a dramatic reading of this myself! Can I?
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course you can!
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:iconsmilinghatsalesmare:
SmilingHatSalesmare Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome!
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:iconsmilinghatsalesmare:
SmilingHatSalesmare Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd be quite honored actually
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:iconlostsilverkitty:
lostsilverkitty Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ok now I'm scared XD
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:iconslenderchild13:
slenderchild13 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014
same here dnt wnt 2 thnk, no thnky, no thnky
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:iconthedemonofsloth:
TheDemonOfSloth Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Okay now I'm crepped out... anyways this is a really great written literature, as it is now on my group. (sorry for the SUPER late compliment, I'm busy)
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:iconoh-my-maple:
Oh-My-Maple Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
*reads last line* OMIGOSH! there is a pony whispering to me! :D *looks around* ... Awww...
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:iconhatsumipikachu:
HatsumiPikachu Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome^^What's the name of this pony?Have you given gher one?(Wo after a creepypasta you alays nedd to ask for the namje xD)
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, I haven't tought of giving it a name, I think it's best to leave it to the reader's imagination to give him a name and image
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:iconhatsumipikachu:
HatsumiPikachu Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah your right.If you wanna know:I called her Creepy Star :3
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:iconblueleaf22:
blueleaf22 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Holy shet, now i'm scared. ouo
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:iconz4tf2derp:
z4tf2derp Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
really? because the voice in my head is saying bananas are funny l:3
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sooooo..... Do you like Mmmmbananas?
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:iconz4tf2derp:
z4tf2derp Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012
actually not really 0W0
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:iconpurpleluverforever:
PurpleLuverForever Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm freaked out now. I was looking around scared. And I actually am afraid to think now... And that little voice is there as I type this.

Oh god. ;A;
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:iconiiriver-of-blood:
iiRiver-Of-Blood Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Student Artist
Woah :faint: you're good at writing creepy stuff!! :D
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconiiriver-of-blood:
iiRiver-Of-Blood Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Student Artist
NP :D
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:iconask--poppyfrost:
Ask--Poppyfrost Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012
At the end i looked over my shoulder, and next to me and was like "Shit."
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:iconyorkbrony:
YorkBrony Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
That's cool man, it's not like I have school tomorrow or anything important like that. Don't need sleep, nope.
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:iconlimey-boy:
Limey-Boy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Okay, I'll admit that last line creepy as all hell. Genuinely never heard that before.
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I tried to write an original kind of creepy
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:iconlimey-boy:
Limey-Boy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
its one of those "spur of the moment" creepy's that when you really think about it doesn't make sense and becomes un-scary. :L

but the image at the top helps reinforce the whole thing the entire time though, so that's a good idea.
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Especially if the room is in complete silence
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:iconlimey-boy:
Limey-Boy Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Agreement.

But I have the audio commentary to Men in Black 2 on in the background so... yeah XD
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehehe
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:iconmitsu-chiruno:
Mitsu-Chiruno Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
I was reading this in two voices: Pinkie's and Fluttershy's. I kept switching whenever it felt right.
And then I read the last line and thought 'NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE'. x'D
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, I wanted to give the last line a sort of creepy punchline style, actually Fluttershy's voice seems fitting
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:iconmitsu-chiruno:
Mitsu-Chiruno Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Ahaha, yeah, I think her voice would speed up a bit the nearer it got to the end.
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uhm hey, do you think you could do a Pinkie or Fluttershy impression?
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:iconmitsu-chiruno:
Mitsu-Chiruno Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
I could do Fluttershy better than Pinie, but I'm not sure if I'd do it for a video or sound x'D Sorry ^^"
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
my shitty voice if I may add
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem, already did it with my voice
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:iconmitsu-chiruno:
Mitsu-Chiruno Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool ^^ Is it gonna go on Youtube?
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, here it is [link]
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah!
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:iconmickey-the-luxray:
Mickey-the-Luxray Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That picture reminds me of Zalgo. Or Red Helper ._\)
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, that's actually a deviation I made, it's called Zalgoshy
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:iconhans-3:
hans-3 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
well........................
not bad.....
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconcrystallyna:
Crystallyna Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
.. > - > ;;


Why in God's name was my mind reading this in Pinkie's voice..
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:iconjuliofco:
juliofco Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That seems surprisingly fitting
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